halfling questionsI really want to continue "Halfling", especially since I have some interesting plans for the chapter ahead, however I have to know something now. You see, I posted this story of fanfiction.net and I didn't get many reviews lol. And one reader did not feel that my last chapter made sense at all. According to this person, it was unreasonable for Nessie to go to 'leave the country' after being rejected by Jacob, though I did explain that Nessie isn't like us so traveling isn't really a big deal to her or any of the Cullens, for that matter. And she left to get some things straightened out but oh well, this reader still didn't comprehend. So that brings me to question if my story is truly making sense and if not, then where and how do I go about changing some things. Please give me some advice, whoever is reading my story. I'm trying not to be over-sensitive about this lol. hugs!
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HalfwayJust wait One more moment, Let it last just one minute More Before you take that step That will drive me farther Away.Halfway
Wet pines, Salt from the sea, Rushing tides Blow chills down my neck. I feel so cold, It's not a comfortable Thought. I need the sun's sheltering Arms, I need the honeysuckle scent From your skin To breathe. Wait, please Wait, love Wait, please.
Let time crawl But stand still For me Until my memory is filled With every trace, every Contour Of your
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Absencewindow overlooks snow on grass fog meets glass, says hi to lonely soul.Absence
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Sweet DreamsOld movies inspired my style, Storybooks clouded my view, Had to believe in princesses To learn how to grow up To be one too. Now I'm dancing in a ballroom, Wearing the prettiest dress, And twirling as though I were Delusional. In reality, I see the same things As everyone else. But I wouldn't ever run Out in shame. No, never leave behind A shoe or a single rose For any bastard to pick up. For this reason, I stayed And faced The laughing eyes Around me.Sweet Dreams
Everyone I knew Had told me To abandon th
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CallingThis morning I stepped outside And was surprised By chilling fingers On my shoulder. Completely taken Off guard As I turned the key In the lock. My startled expression Extricated a chuckle From my unexpected Visitor. Surely, I should have Concluded That the ever cascading Rain From the night before Meant The arrival of his Fall.Calling
He is the fall While his sister Is autumn. She touches the leaves With her palms, Tinting them in her wake. He brings the breeze; The cris
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A Tune For The InvisibleIf I am the wind, I wish to caress your skin with symphonies to tend you to sleep. If then,A Tune For The Invisible
I can admire your sophistication And saturate your intelligence while my fingers whistle a carol. I'm such a humbled whisperer, But I'll behave as if I am a statue So you can carry on with your unnoticed life.
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Nippy NightmaresMaybe If she doesn't wake up, She'll live longer than she desires.Nippy Nightmares
What if she could have an eternal rest, Death wouldn't be itching to slay her.
A slumber might just save her from an expired date, However what will save her from the monster in her nightmares,
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"Locked In The Dungeon"
I really appreciate
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Thank you so much for the
I really appreciate!!!
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Beyond the dreams...
"Autumn" & "Back Home"
I really appreciate
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I have a tendency to wear my mind on my sleeve.
I'm glad that people actually take time to read/look at some of my work. It is pleasing.
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i always fight for my sanity,
but it seems like i always lose;
blog . subeta . twloha
It is really appreciated. I am just about to look at some of your stuff.
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